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ACTION Sequences - Plug+Play
Writing ACTION Sequences
The Plug & Play Method
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The flash of pain exploded in my cheek from the slap her hand lashed out at me.
-- WRONG!
Why is this wrong?
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If you were watching this scene as a movie, that sentence is NOT how you would have seen it happen.
Actual Sequence of events:
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1) Her hand lashed out at me in a slap.
2) A flash of pain exploded in my cheek
ACTION Sequences = Chronological Order
REALITY = something happens to you and then…you react.
Action > Reaction > Action > Reaction = Chronological order
FICTION = the Plot happens to
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